Initial Animatic 1 and Audience Feedback

I created an anamatic for my first proposal to give my audience a better sense as to what the film was about and show them pictures about where locations will be and how I will shoot each shot. I showed this anamatic for my initial proposal to my media class and asked for audience feedback:



They did not just criticise my work though, they gave me some idea onto how I can make my next idea much better, here are the notes I took from my audience feedback:

• Base my film around one central protagonist
• Create a twist that can be explained towards the end of the film
• Enter into the horror genre, create some scary scenarios in your idea
• Do not use school kids, have the central protagonist a little older.

Using this audience feedback I am going to now re-think my idea, make a new anamatic and then post it onto Youtube and Facebook as well as asking my media class.