Final Proposal

Our final idea was a combination of both mine and Conor's thoughts and ideas, and after audience feedback from our initial ideas, we got many idea which were incorporated into our final idea. After lots of thought and feedback, I am certain this is the idea my coursework will be based around:

Name: The Unknown Secret

Synopsis: A male in his early 20's is out walking on a moor. He stumbles across a deserted travelers camp site, where he sees a set of discarded bags, and he becomes suspicious, something is not right! There is blood on the floor and on some of the items, the male decides he should not be here, and turns back on himself to walk away. As he is walking back in the same direction, the sound of a crow, makes him turn his head and look up at a house. As he catches a glimpse of the house, he notices smoke rising from the area, and heads up towards the house to investigate. 

A camera shot is used to follow the man as he walks home in the impression that someone is following the male, as he walks up to the house. As he come in close proximity of the house, he notices a dead body outside, and try's to help it up, but as he is pulling the arm, it falls off into his hand. He hears the sound of the dog again, and runs away in the same direction. 

He runs up to his house, he enters through the door and slams it behind him, walking into the kitchen and leaning over the sink drinking from the tap and washing the sweat from his face. The camera then rises above his head, and shows his victim, a blonde girl with mascara running down her face, looking mucky and disheveled. She has blood on her forehead, she is in a struggle.